rocaman435
Beginner Rapper
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Post by rocaman435 on Aug 3, 2007 16:21:41 GMT -5
not my first drop ever but first to a rap forum, not my best shit, mostly ventin, gimme some feedback
Man i swear somethins wrong internally I feel like everyones tryin to earn-on-me either that or kick dirt-on-me I dont even 'trust' this world cuz itll 'turn-on-me' I could try to change-the-reel it wont change-the-deals, made by entertainment,-still tradin marketability in exchange-for-skills, it doesnt fade me still I remain on point wit a nash-first-step I gotta nack-for-death attack while u still gasp for breath cuz im tired of these cats sayin they gonna flash-techs then the beef start and they 'bounce' like bad-checks so without further adue-time let me introduce-my, Italian tapdance ya whole crew get shoe-shined you kids are better off pickin out some casket-carpet I scar quick, slice ya throat wit a slash-guitar-pick and fuck a drive-by, my gats-get-car-sick.
alright lemme get some feedback.
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Post by rapperpluz on Aug 3, 2007 22:44:11 GMT -5
ITS OK I GUESS. NEED WAY MORE.
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